Summary About Revisi

             Resivi aims to clarify the concepts that we write so that readers can understand the concepts that have been written. A good writer, posts that have solved the first time was not presented to the reader to find really ynag cases they wrote. After that, the authors revise them so that writers and readers to think the same way about writing.

             Revising is difficult, The first thing to consider is what is sought by the reader, and second, to determine whether you may find the thought of the reader. To do these two things have to analyze the design objective.Many people revise a paper just like the correct spelling rearrange and clarify the evidence argument.

              In revising the reader must understand three things:

• Where is the background stops.

• Where the conclusion begins.

• Is the first sentence or two into the lead.

              To be sure, we must do the following:

1. Make some empty space after the background and before conclusion.

2. Put the main point near the end of the background. Then compare it with one of your conclusions.

3. If the main sentence in the background is not a major point but just point completes, do not use for your topic. Revising can be more specific by adding the key to the concept that it becomes a theme in writing.

               In revising the argument, the point to consider to make the writing better, are:

• Identify the substance of the argument is very important that we know the structure of the argument is made in accordance with the structure of our report.
• Evaluate the quality of the argument, what causes the reader to reject these arguments. In arguments are examined data and citations to the record, readers see how the quote and the data are related to a claim, you have not passed the main penegah subreason main reasons and supporting  evidence.
• How is the quality of our argument.

                After the report finished, make sure the report is coherent. Each part of the paragraph should be relevant to other paragraphs. In each paragraph should be an introduction sentence or more. If the sentence is not a sentence beginning principal then the last sentence. Avoid very long paragraphs and use two or three sentence paragraph just to list, transitions, introductions and conclusions for parts, or to report that you want to emphasize.

Final Test Skeleton

I. Introduction: the positive values ​​of the village office.

A.    Background

•         The development of a computer system is very rapid effect on the processing of data.

•         In the village office data processing personnel is still not optimal so that the necessary improvements.

B.     Problem Formulation

•         Formulate how to make data processing more efficiently.

C.     Limitation Problem

•         The environment around the village office.

•         People who are registered as citizens residing in the village.

D.    Purpose

•         To facilitate the performance in data processing personnel.

•         Designing employee data processing program.

•         Improve work efficiency associated with processing of employee data.

E.     Benefit

•         For academia and science.

•         For the district office when the results of which have been designed to guide the processing of employee data better.

F.      Research Methods

•         Research into the field

•         Interview.

     II. Basis Theory

•         Basic concepts system.

•         Basic concepts of information systems.

•         Definition of system analysis

•         Definition of data processing.

    II.                      III. Analysis and Design of the system

•         Analysis of the current system.

•         The design of the system.

 III.                      IV. Results and Analysis

•         Regarding the analysis of the new system better data flow diagrams, relationship, and program design context diagram.

 IV.                      V. Conclusions and Recommendations

•         Conclusion and suggestions that can be given to the development of a data processing system for the better.

Argument About Contra Euthanasia

Euthanasia is the act of termination of human life either by injecting certain substances or by taking pills or other means. Euthanasia should not be used in Indonesia because when it's done the same as kill . In Indonesia, if someone took your life or kill, so someone be down with sanctions as follows:

•         344 of the Criminal Code - whoever eliminates the lives of others at the request of the man himself, which he called the real. And sentenced to prison for ever 12 th.

•         338 - Eliminate the lives of others

•         340 - Murder plans

•         359 - Because the harm caused the death of another org

•         345 - Inciting others to suicide.

In addition, Killing forbidden by any religion. Christian religion forbids any person to take life as it is written in the holy book of the Christians: Do not Kill! (Exodus 20: 13). Islamic teachings also forbade bleak written: And do not kill the soul which Allah has forbidden (to kill) but with something (because) that's right. (QS Al-An’am : 151)

Making A Argument

Claim:

Fumes of Vehicle  can harm people's health.

Reason:

Because  fumes of vehicle can cause respiratory problems, eye irritation, heart disease and others.

Evidence:

From the research conducted, fumes of vehicle contains:

1. Carbon monoxide. 

    Gas is toxic, can cause pain in the eyes, respiratory tract and lungs. If it gets into the bloodstream    through inhalation, carbon monoxide reacts with hemoglobin in the blood to form COHb (karboksihemoglobin).

2. Sulfur oxide. 

    Sulfur oxide, when inhaled by breathing, will react with water in the respiratory tract and form sulfuric acid that will damage system in human body  and cause pain. Sulfur oxidation can also be dissolved in rainwater and cause acid rain.

3. Nitrogen of oxides. 

    Nitrogen of oxides reacts with other pollutants and cause the phenomenon of smoke-haze or smog. Smog causes reduced visibility, irritation of the eyes and respiratory tract, making plants wilt, and degrade the quality of the material.

However, I acknowledge agrumen denial about the dangers of vehicle fumes on public health are not true. Opinion was received because I can not at this time but the disruption of public health in the future.

Summary Of Argument

Chapter 7
Making Good Arguments: An Overview

In making the argument can not wait for the answers of the questions you ask it. Because if used as such, we do not know the concept of the arguments. Arguments in a research report is a conversation with the reader. In a research report, the argument contains a claim, the reasons supporting, evidence for the reasons, an acknowledgment of opinion and the opinions of other than a principle or a guarantee that explains of the opinion.

Make an argument in a research report prepared by using questions such as:

·         What is my claim?

·         What reasons support my claim?

·         What evidence supports my reasons?

·         Do I acknowledge alternatives / complications / objections, and how do I respond?

·         What principle/warrant makes my reasons relevant to my claim?

Claim is a sentence that says something that can be true or false that require a support. There are two types of support: reason and evidence.

 The first type of support, the opinion of the reason. The reason is a statement given so that readers can accept that argument. The second type of support, explaining the evidence. Evidence is the support that makes the basis of the reasons for that opinion. It can be said that an opinion because of reasons and based on the evidence. The following diagram support the case.

In a research report, there is an argument thickening process. This process is one way that writers earn the confidence of their readers. Readers evaluate arguments not only with the facts you have to offer, but how well you anticipate their questions and concerns. As such, they also assess the quality of your mind, even your character implied, traditionally called your ethos.

Summary of The Lesson

Wednesday, 17^th October 2012. Method of research explain about motivation in a research report. Two weeks ago, method of research explain about introduction, background and problem formulation. The problem have been formulated is the basic for form of motivation. Motivation explain about solve of problem. In the research report, there are two important parts of motivation: (1) purpose; (2) benefit. The purpose to explain final result of research to relation problem formulation. Examples :

1.      If the formulation of the problem: how far ......?

Purpose: knowing the level of influence .......

2.      If the formulation of the problem: what is ......?

Purpose: to result information clarity how ....

3.      If the formulation of the problem: how much percentage ......?

Purpose: to result value….

Benefit to explain how the purpose have been achieved an provide benefits to the academic and scientific.

            To be more details, The following is an example of the motivation, purpose and benefit in a research report.

Motivation

·         To know the harmful substances contained in cigarettes.

·         To know the important phases in mother who are pregnant.

Destination

·         Produce a concrete explanation of the link between smoking and infant growth.

Benefit

·         When pregnant women use these results to guide the baby will be born healthy.

In research, there are hypothesis. Hypothesis in a research report written after the formulation of the problem. Write a research report don’t use extreme words such as: all, nothing, always, never, surely.

Summary of Book "The Craft of Research"

 A researcher not only learn how to find information, but how to evaluate and report clearly and accurately. Learning research can help prepare in the future: first, to help understand what is read as can not. Second, learn to value the study reported clearly and accurately. Doing research is the sheer pleasure of solving a puzzle, to find something that no one else knows. In doing the research must honest, careful because the reporting is hard work, which consists of many tasks, often competing to pay close attention at the same time. And no matter how careful planning.

           Researchers should work with their plans. There are two types of plans: (1) preparing and conducting research, (2) prepare a report. The researchers used a standard form to anticipate what readers look for, as follows:

• Write important information first on a story, not just to make the job easier preparation, but also so that readers can find the essence of the news quickly, then decide whether to read.
• An accountant follows the standard form for his audit report is not only to set up his own writings, but that investors can find the information they need to decide.
• A Food and Drug Administration scientists predicted follow-report forms for scientific Introduction, Methods and Materials, helps readers find the specific issues they have to consider before they found him.

       Without realizing it, most research is done every day but not written. In the present study should be written in order to see the error and then can be corrected. The reasons are: (1) Writing a research can remember what has been read, (2) Writing a larger pattern from being read so as to be understood, (3) to write then what is already thought can be poured into the paper.

        Writing is an important part of learning, thinking, and understanding. So, write a research report should be formal so that it can be understood by the reader. And in writing the report writer should think well in order to elaborate on his research.